I wrote a new song!
Here it is:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k_Dwhj_odrw

-theworldhadteeth

Good one twht ! Got better and better as you got into it. Thanks for posting !

Cheers,

GuitarZen

Thanks GZ. I'm working out the lyrics for another one now, so maybe I'll post it soon!
-theworldhadteeth

Twht, Nice.  great  tune. Gotta real home touch...

Thanks Buddy!
-theworldhadteeth

I like it, but it seems to modatone. Change it up a little bit. Get some new chord changes in there. Other than that.. Good lyrics

good song bud keep it up
all though i agree with Thiery a bit
i dont know if you need to change the chords up
but maybe walk some like for example in a song that goes from
G maj to E or Em hit like the second fret on the low E
to make a transition beat kinda deal especially between when
you sing a line and before you change to the next vocal line

Thanks guys! I'm glad everyone likes it!