It was a bad break up. and then i fell for his best friend...and it goes like this:

V1:  I never thought it was possible
you were his best friend
so different yet so alike
never thought you'd look at me
never thought you would see
what we could be

C:  I'm falling for you
You're the reason for all i do
when you're around me
there's nothing i cant do
'cuz i'm falling for you

V2:  just when i thought we would never be
you turned my world around
you made me see
the more i saw the more i believed
things were so clear to me
the sky is bluer, the grass is greener
its all how it should be cuz

CHORUS

(vocal break/oooo's)

Ending Chorus:  I've fallen for you
you're still the reason for all i do
when you're around me
there's nothing i cant do
'cuz i love you yeah
i love you


honestly i think it sounds better if i have the music with it so i'm gonna try and get my link up ASAP but please, gimme some advice on how to make it flow more in the meantime.

Hi,
Welcome to chord book.  I would like to hear the music for this before I may be able to suggest anything.

Jim

IT SOUND REALY GOOD' LIKE JAG SAID ,AND WELCOME TO CHORDBOOK

Welcome to chordbook. Not much a lyricist myself but the 2nd verse actually said bridge to me. Of course then you'd need to write another verse.

i like the lyrics very heartfelt you don't hear that much anymore
and the accompanying music would be the clincher
so jam it hard not so hard that old people cover their ears in disgust
but hard enough where it is not a downer. its already a tough time after
a break up with someone you obviously care about so what does everybody
want in that situation? to be happy again like before so make the music
catchy and healing? not sure healing is the word i'm searching for but
i hope you get the picture